(first chapter / Fanfiction.net / AO3)
Awwww, Joker and Garrus interaction! That was one of the cutest scenes in the game, when they were telling each other terrible jokes on the bridge. I always wished there’d been more conversations between them.
The idea of them sitting there, worrying about their girlfriends together is so sweet. … and I love that they’re stuck on the Normandy while their badass ladies shoot the hell out of everything. XD
I can’t wait to see what you do with Joker and his reaction to EDI’s, um, mishap planetside. You’re gonna stab us right in the feels, aren’t you, Emma? ;P
Oh gosh, thanks! <33 I’m glad you liked Garrus’s “intervention,” haha; this was one of the scenes I had in mind when I started this fic. (There’s just something so endearing about two soldiers worrying about their badass ladyfriends. :D) But yeah, I got stuck on writing Garrus’s thoughts, so I had to go play a bit of ME1 to get some ideas.
As to your last question, I hope so! Err, not in a bad way though. I mean, yes, in a good and bad, bad-good way. *cough* >.> …I’ll just stop talking now.